Friday, September 27, 2013

I assure you

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I. F.— That's right! pepper them well; a lucky shot! that fellow will pay us for our fright. I assure you I did not breathe! --Scenes Beyond the Western Border, September 1851; and Scenes and Adventures in the Army
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I. F. "A forfeit! Mathematics are infernal.'"

"— I assure you (it is a secret of mine) that nothing else known among men can cope with feminine logic; but that is magical; the d—l can as well resist holy water."  --Scenes Beyond the Western Border, December 1851; and, revised, in Scenes and Adventures in the Army



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My romance I assure you is no dish water nor its model borrowed from the Circulating Library. It is something new I assure you, & original if nothing more. But I can give you no adequate idea, of it. You must see it for yourself. -- Only forbear to prejudge it. -- It opens like a true narrative -- like Omoo for example, on ship board -- & the romance & poetry of the thing thence grow continually, till it becomes a story wild enough I assure you & with a meaning too. --Letter to John Murray, March 25 1848 - Melville's Correspondence.
The transition is a keen one, I assure you, from a schoolmaster to a sailor, and requires a strong decoction of Seneca and the Stoics to enable you to grin and bear it.  -- Moby-Dick
—so one may wake up wise, and slow of assent, very wise and very slow, I assure you, and for all that, before night, by like trick in the atmosphere, be left in the lurch a ninny. --The Confidence-Man

how to make literary use of grass and frost

Here's a cool little case study in creative revision or ghostwriting.  See how the plain matter-of-fact journal entry of Philip St George Cooke has been used to jump start one of the numerous prairie dialogues between the narrating Captain of U.S. Dragoons and his Imaginary Friend (I. F. for short).  In his original 1843 report, Cooke mentioned "black frosts" and routinely noted the availability and condition of grass:
"October 5th.   I marched Eastward.  We began now to be exposed to black frosts and the grass rather suddenly failed us.....
October 18....I found grass in a timbered creek bottom  Page 9
The rewrite makes a dramatic scene out of Cooke's straightforward narrative.  The dialogue is invented, but key factual details have been lifted from the 1843 army journal:
I. F.—"Very interesting, this dry grass and frost! Has the idea of home banished me from your thoughts?"
— "Ah, no! I am a bit of a philosopher; and take this October marching very kindly— particularly after thawing of a morning; and riding ahead, I kill a grouse occasionally with my pistol."  (Scenes Beyond the Western Border, January 1852)

A bit of a philosopher!

Thursday, September 26, 2013

white stone added in revision of Cooke's 1843 Journal

Hey look! That Melvillean reference to marking fortunate days with a white stone was added in revision of Philip St George Cooke's 1843 Journal of the Santa Fe Trail.

Original:
"October 5th.   I marched Eastward.  We began now to be exposed to black frosts and the grass rather suddenly failed us.  In order to encamp every night in a river bottom where it was best, and where some drift wood could be obtained, I left the road near Jackson Grove, and guided my command three days and a half, and finally struck the road again at the point I wished, and within a mile of the distance I expected; although in places ten or twelve miles from the road, I had not lost a mile in the distance."
William E. Connelley, ed., A Journal of the Santa Fe Trail. Quoted passage above is from Cooke's account of the return trip.  His account of the march home (a copy, not in Cooke's handwriting) in fall 1843 is in the National Archives and available now at Fold3, Letters Received by the Adjutant General, 1843 C307.  Cooke's longer chronicle of the summer escort is also in the 1843 Letters Received by the Adjutant General, C252.
1851-2 rewrite:
Oct. 7.—Mark this day with a white stone! After travelling 60 or 70 miles off the road—encamping each night on the river in comparatively good grass, and with drift-wood fuel too, I this morning, as guide, took a course for the crossing of the Pawnee Fork, and struck it to a degree!
Scenes Beyond the Western Border, January 1852  and
 Scenes and Adventures in the Army

Wednesday, September 25, 2013

days marked with a white stone

"...whiteness has been even made significant of gladness, for among the Romans a white stone marked a joyful day..." Moby-Dick (1851)

Oct. 7.—Mark this day with a white stone! After travelling sixty or seventy miles off the road—encamping each night on the river in comparatively good grass, and with driftwood fuel too, I this morning, as guide, took a course for the crossing of the Pawnee Fork, and struck it to a degree! ....This has been a true October day—delightful and magnificent October!
 Scenes Beyond the Western Border, January 1852
Scenes and Adventures in the Army
"... you desire to hear of Colonel John Moredock. Well, a day in my boyhood is marked with a white stone—the day I saw the colonel's rifle, powder-horn attached, hanging in a cabin on the West bank of the Wabash river."  The Confidence-Man (1857)

Tuesday, September 3, 2013

not for the worldling

"View not the world with worldling's eyes...."  Lone Founts from Timoleon 
I address not then, the shallow or hurried worldling; but the friendly one, who in the calm intervals from worldly cares, grants me the aid of a quiet and thoughtful,—and if it may be,—a poetic mood!
Scenes Beyond the Western Border, July 1852;
 and
Scenes and Adventures in the Army

Sunday, September 1, 2013

philosophical pretensions

Mesmer's animal magnetism therapy Wellcome V0011096
"... in this sheet, he seems to have directly plagiarized from his own experiences, to fill out the mood of his apparent author-hero, Vivia, who thus soliloquizes: "A deep-down, unutterable mournfulness is in me. Now I drop all humorous or indifferent disguises, and all philosophical pretensions."  -- Pierre; Or, The Ambiguities (1852)
I. F. "And how do you like 'A Glimmering Light on Mesmerism,' which I perceive you have been reading?"

C. "It shows a research quite extraordinary for a soldier—generally exposed to much literary privation; his enquiring and sceptical mind has been excited and puzzled by the strange developments, or pretensions of this magical philosophy."   
-- Scenes Beyond the Western Border, June 1852; and
Scenes and Adventures in the Army