Thursday, June 30, 2011

Love is all in all



Melville, Mardi 
Love is all in all.

 "Scenes Beyond the Western Border," Southern Literary Messenger (August 1852): 508    
Thus love at last, as love at first—all absorbing—feeding upon music,—sporting with war:—love, the link of earth to heaven,—love is all in all!

Tuesday, June 28, 2011

passing the love of women


Scenes Beyond the Western Border, Southern Literary Messenger 18 (August 1852):

August 1852 quoting
2 Samuel 1:26




Scenes and Adventures in the Army, p 356:
1857 book version with
"passing the love of women" deleted

Can be a bond 
(Thought he) as David sings in strain
That dirges beauteous Jonathan,
Passing the love of woman fond?
And may experience but dull
The longing for it? Can time teach?  (Clarel 3.30)

Sunday, June 26, 2011

reality too real

 Melville, Pierre (1852):
the reality was too real

"Scenes Beyond the Western Border" (December 1851): 729
But the Reality I think is too darkly, coldly real, the earth very earthy; but, to please you, mark—I now attempt a lower level.




The Byronic bit about reality being too real was deleted in the 1857 book Scenes and Adventures in the Army.  Also cut in revision was the word "mark," corresponding to Melville's "mark" and "hark" in Moby-Dick.  The book version keeps the Captain's "lower level" which parallels Ahab's "lower layer."

Saturday, June 25, 2011

behind and before

Last chapter title of Melville's third book:
Mardi behind:  an Ocean before

End of first major narrative section of "Scenes Beyond the Western Border" (January 1852): 50
...with charred deserts behind,—and forgotten; and new storms before, but unforeseen....

Wednesday, June 22, 2011

skepticism and credulity

Raphael - Saint George Fighting the Dragon

In Mardi and A Voyage Thither (1849) Herman Melville's wandering philosopher Babbalanja posits
... a brutality of indiscriminate skepticism
as a bad thing. The opposite of that would be
... a blind heroism of credulity!
as proposed by the wandering Captain of U. S. Dragoons in the August 1852 installment of Scenes Beyond the Western Border. Revised in Part II of Scenes and Adventures in the Army (1857).

silence, fearful, never so

 Herman Melville, Pierre, or The Ambiguities (1852):
"Pierre," said Isabel, "this silence is unnatural, is fearful. The forests are never so still."
 "Scenes Beyond the Western Border" in the Southern Literary Messenger Volume 19 (March 1853) page 157:
F.—"And what was there remarkable in my natural calmness?"

C.—"It was never so! There was a brooding desolation around that could penetrate a sleeping soul!—There is a re-action of extraordinary excitement,—such as ours of yesterday—that has a power over me which renders a profound silence awful—of all else, fearful! Silence! Then, every sentient of my soul has ears, in which air spirits supernaturally whisper distracting, sonorous thoughts :— in darkness, with long unrest, it verges madness..."
Note:  the line with "never so" disappears from this dialogue in Scenes and Adventures in the Army.  Also missing are the words awful and fearful ("fearful" in the revised version becomes "fearfully," thus:  "My watch is lonely and fearfully silent"). 

Tuesday, June 21, 2011

fossiliferous

via NYPL Digital Collections


Yow! It's the middle term (second of three adjectives) in both cases...

Melville, Moby-Dick
...to magnify him in an archaeological, fossiliferous, and antediluvian point of view.
"Scenes Beyond the Western Border" (August 1852): 510
—all by the light of your chronological, fossiliferous, infernal shell!

Sunday, June 19, 2011

the mind gets morbid

Captain Delano in Melville's Benito Cereno - November 1855:
Well, well; these long calms have a morbid effect on the mind, I've often heard, though I never believed it before.
Captain of U.S. Dragoons in Scenes Beyond the Western Border, Southern Literary Messenger, March 1853 pages 157-8:
It may result from our profession, that the mind has these fits of morbid activity, as if to revenge itself for seasons of neglect.
Note:  this 1853 comment on "morbid activity" of "the mind" was deleted in revision of "Scenes Beyond the Western Border" and does not appear in the 1857 book version, Scenes and Adventures in the Army.  Why cut it...too close to the phrasing of practically the same idea in "Benito Cereno," first published October-November-December 1855 in Putnam's?

mazes and fancies

Melville, Mardi:
...her fancies all roving through mazes.
"Scenes Beyond the Western Border" in the Southern Literary Messenger (August 1852): 508
...a maze of extravagant fancies

fly off

Herman Melville, in Mardi (1849):
"You all fly off at tangents," cried Media...

"Scenes Beyond the Western Border" in the Southern Literary Messenger (August 1852): 508
"...you fly off into a maze of extravagant fancies..."

Saturday, June 18, 2011

A Truce

Maybe it's from living out here on the prairie too long but these things haunt me.  These innumerable congruences I mean between the writings of Herman Melville and the prairie musings of "A Captain of U. S. Dragoons" in "Scenes Beyond the Western Border."  Originally serialized in the Southern Literary Messenger from June 1851 through August 1853, "Scenes Beyond the Western Border" became (after revision) Part II of Philip St. George Cooke's first book, Scenes and Adventures in the Army: Or, Romance of Military Life (Philadelphia: Lindsay & Blakiston, 1857).  Did Herman Melville ghost-write military memoirs for Philip St George Cooke?  Despite no, that is to say, zero documentary evidence linking Melville and Cooke, I don't know how else to account for so many congruences or correspondences or parallels or whatever they are.  What am I talking about?  Ah, thank you for asking!  Here goes then...

Herman Melville in Mardi (1849):
"A truce to your everlasting pratings of old Bardianna," said King Media.
 "Scenes Beyond the Western Border," Southern Literary Messenger (August 1852):  509;  Scenes and Adventures in the Army (1857), p. 358:
C. "...But a truce to day-dreams; light as they are, the whole world granteth them not a foundation spot!"